oh my god the fuck!
that was genius.
oh my god the fuck!
that was genius.
Cmon man
graphics, animation, timing an such where all very good but dudes.. that concept has been done so many times.. I know its a "parody" but it had nothing new at all. It would have been funny if it went over the top but this never crossed the line between cliche and parody, which got on my nerves. Unsatisfying to say the least.
nice work but you
about the graphics:
This is the only thing that bothered me a little. I got this feeling that you should loosen up your drawing style, work with more and faster strokes, I'm certain your work would improve.
Apart from that it was very good.
about the animation:
I like how you executed the animation. It looks simple, and thats a good thing.
About the sound:
The music and sound effects where superb, very nicely done, or found.
About the subject:
it's a very interesting subject, but the story is lacking in my opinion. Conflict of emotion within the robot could make it more interesting..
Neway nice work,
Marcus
cool
Overall opinion:
looking good
Contstructive criticism:
animation could use some more speed, maybe try working at a higher frame rate? Try to smoothe out the re-using of graphics a little more, it jumped out when they where suddenly both up and standing just like before.
The difference in graphic quality in your movie is a little too big.
Maybe you could use some more effects, try fading in some white flashes? Oh and animated blood splashes would be cool =P
The concept of Toad being the hero and Mario and Luigi being a pair of.. well fags, is just plain funny to me... maybe some people dont get the humor because your graphics look pretty siriouse, but fuck them dont change that your drawing style kicks ass.
Keep it up,
Marcus
Thanks Marcus... I'm working on the framerate thing.. it's more work but it definately looks better. Also about when they were both up there was another scene on the mountain in between with luigi and mario "IS HE DEAD?... NO LOOK THEY'RE MOVING" but in order to get it to stick with the music I had to take it out.
Thanks for your review man,
~Nate
dude wtf
you just copied a scene from DBZ.. your drawings look nice, I'd say you have the skill/talent but for gods sake do something original with it!
Oh, I copied a scene from DBZ? You know what! I never realised! I thought this was completely original! I even said in my AUTHOR'S COMMENTS that it was a copy to make sure everyone KNEW that it was original!
But enough of the sarcasm.
It's a tribute, it may be a "copy" but I never denied it was a copy. I openly admitted in my author's comments it was a copy, you must not have read them, eh?
At least I didn't trace a video file, now if I did that, it would be a reason to rate lower, but now, you haven't got that reason.
You gave a 0 overall, why? Did I not put any effort whatsoever into my flash? No. I actually put a lot of effort into it, so your 0 is VOID.
And I'm using my skill and talent to make ANOTHER tribute to the show which is the first time Vegeta goes SSJ! And it will be the same as the show, but it won't deserve a 0, ooh no.
Now begone, fool!
what the fuck
you are evil.. I'm so fuckin high that shit tripped me out man
Weak indeed
you didnt show he was a moron, you just told us, the quotes where uninteresting, you just made fun of his fatness and you told us he hates America and Democracy which I dont believe.
You just showed some uninteresting facts and added your own opinion.. Definetly a low point in the series.
woah
your style is definetly improving a lot, great animation and graphic design, only thing I missed was the voices.
woah
freakin sick, but very good animation and in some sick way very funny!
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